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I meant to get these in on time for the [livejournal.com profile] ds_snippets amnesty challenge, but for reasons that don't need exploring at this juncture, that didn't happen. So... bummer. So... they're here instead. Made possible by [livejournal.com profile] akamine_chan, who graciously beta-ed.


Title: they stood, together
Author: verushka
Fandom: DS
Rating: G
Prompt: Challenge 100 * spin * twitch * stalk * pounce * fall
Word Count: 265
Excerpt: Diefenbaker knows the closer they are to the water, the steadier and cooler the breeze is -- a relief in summer, when concrete holds heat.




Diefenbaker knows the closer they are to the water, the steadier and cooler the breeze is -- a relief in summer, when concrete holds heat. He grumbles, pouts, whines the tiniest bit. Eventually, Fraser gives in. They go down to the lake. There Fraser's twitches and tics slow; he breathes deeper, grows minutely taller, relaxes.

They once walked almost to Evanston together, in Indian summer. On the way back, lifeguards and their “no dogs” -- or half-wolves -- rules gone, Dief trotted to the end of a lone pier that stood out from a tiny beach.

The pier light's paint was flaked, the housing rusted, the light long since burnt out. The sun had set minutes before, far, far west. Murky water surrounded on three sides, lapping gently, then harder. The twilight breeze sighed and rose into a light wind, then a steady blowing -- not strong by arctic standards, but stretching flags sideways and parting his fur no matter which way he turned. He spun twice, then faced into it, stiff-legged.

By the time Fraser joined him, night flowed westward over them, darkening the water below and the air overhead. Clouds, as they often do, boiled up with the rising night and steady wind. Combined with the city's light pollution, they extinguished what few stars might have peeked through. The sky above them was as black as the water chopping at all three sides of the pier.

They stood, together, thrust out into the dark, rough sky and water, seemingly at the edge of the world.

The wind-borne bite of the winter-to-come soothed.





Title: a huntress
Author: verushka
Fandom: DS
Rating: G
Prompt: Challenge 100 * spin * twitch * stalk * pounce * fall
Word Count: 257
Excerpt: She huddled close to the ground. He thought that she might be hurt. But as he drew quietly nearer, he realized she was stalking something.


She was so well-groomed, so prim... yet flirtatious. Her scent was exotic, unnatural. A ribbon in her hair...

Beside her, he was rough, uncouth, wild. But he knew he could protect her. He could hunt for her. He could provide.

She was utterly wrong for him. But he couldn't resist her hairless areas, her baffling hygiene. She was sleek. Soft. He lay beside her and guarded her.

But one night, restlessly prowling, he caught a new scent on the breeze. The hair on the back of his neck stood up. At the mouth of an alley, he picked up the trail again and followed it carefully, wary of broken glass.

She huddled close to the ground. He thought that she might be hurt. But as he drew quietly nearer, he realized she was stalking something.

Only in this city would rabbits eat garbage.

She crept along silently on her belly, intent. Her leap and pounce were graceful; she fell on the rabbit with her paws, then snatched him up in her jaws.

He accidentally stepped on a plastic spoon, which snapped.

She wheeled and growled, crunching down the rabbit in a few hungry gulps. She was lean. Wild.

A huntress.

You are not wolf, Diefenbaker said, enchanted.

You are? she countered.

I am half wolf, he told her proudly.

I am all coyote, she replied regally.

I know where there are donuts, he said.

Her exquisitely mussed fur ruffled in the night breeze.

What are donuts?

They are much easier to catch than rabbits, Diefenbaker told her.





Title: return the favor/bitter reward
Author: verushka
Fandom: HCL/FTWHTWD
Character/Pairing: Joe Dick/Jerry Bines
Rating: NC-17
Prompt: Challenge 103: * grey * ash * drizzle * bitter * railroad * grand * barren
Word Count: 277
Excerpt: “Sorry,” Jerry murmured, pulling his jeans up from around his knees where they'd been since last night.





They woke to drizzle. He stayed in bed until he couldn't.

“Fuckin' cold,” Joe muttered when Jerry slipped out of bed to piss.

“Sorry,” Jerry murmured, pulling his jeans up from around his knees where they'd been since last night. He stepped into his boots and out to light rain on trees and fallen leaves, grey light behind the clouds.

Jerry had picked him up by the railroad tracks, baseball cap on backwards over his flattened mohawk, ratty wool coat, acoustic guitar at his side, thumb out. Nothing grand. Stranger. Safe.

Back in the semi-dark cabin, Joe lay on his back, now, shirt halfway up his stomach. He snored lightly.

Jerry was used to a barren life. This, he wasn't used to. He stirred the ashes, looked for glowing coals, shoved wood into the stove, hands shaking. The noise woke Joe.

“The fuck?”

“You said it was cold.”

Joe shoved his hand in his jeans, shut his eyes, and curled on his side.

In a few steps Jerry stood at the bedside. Joe half-opened his eyes.

Jerry knelt. “Return the favor?” he asked, voice rough.

Joe wordlessly rolled on his back and shoved his jeans down, already hard.

As he bent his head to the musky cock, Joe cupped his jaw. “Slow,” he muttered. “Wanna watch.”

Jerry slid his mouth slowly, tightly over the head, heard a sharp inhalation.

He felt the oddly tender stare on him throughout the long, thorough blowjob. Their eyes met across quivering stomach as the bitter reward of Joe's come hit the back of Jerry's throat. Barely audible, a bleak whisper escaped Joe.

“Billy...”

Date: 2009-06-08 01:44 pm (UTC)
luzula: a Luzula pilosa, or hairy wood-rush (Default)
From: [personal profile] luzula
Oh, I like the atmosphere and all the sensory details of the first one.

And hee, I like Dief's pick-up line in the second one.

Date: 2009-06-08 03:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] verushka70.livejournal.com
Thank you. I almost never write Dief. Actually, I think these are my only Dief fics, ever. This seems like a wrong that must be righted...

TYK for the fb!

Date: 2009-06-08 09:41 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] lucifuge-5.livejournal.com
These are great snippets.

I'm feeling much love for both "A Huntress" (because there can never be too many Dief stories) and "Return the Favour/Bitter Reward" (which was bitter indeed.)

Favourite lines:

Barely audible, a bleak whisper escaped Joe.

“Billy...”


Ouchie! Also very, very in character for Joe.

Date: 2009-06-08 11:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] verushka70.livejournal.com
Thank you so much. These are my first Dief efforts. Now that I've done them, I can't imagine why I didn't before...!

Joe. *pets* Just... Joe. Y'know?

Date: 2009-06-09 02:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spuffyduds.livejournal.com
Oooh, these are lush & yummy. Joe, AIGH. And I love the idea of Dief running across a scrappy urban coyote.

And my favorite image, the wind parting Dief's fur no matter which way he turns. Nifty!

Date: 2009-06-09 02:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] verushka70.livejournal.com
Thank you kindly! Also, what is AIGH (she said, not up on the lingo)?

Date: 2009-06-09 03:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spuffyduds.livejournal.com
Oh, man, you don't KNOW about Aliens Infiltrating Gay....um, no, I'm totally kidding, hee!

AIGH is just a sound effect of pain, in the AUGH! ARGH! family.

Hey, mind if I friend you?

Date: 2009-06-10 12:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] verushka70.livejournal.com
Not at all, friend away! However, the online/LJ thing I do in fits & starts due to RSI (repetitive strain injuries). I know people have various friending & defriending policies, but please, please do not be offended if mainly I just lurk... because that's what I do since I lost my IT job & went into nursing (basically because I couldn't do the IT another day without completely shredding my hands, wrists & arms). The days of me being actively online 8+ (or 11+, 12+, including my work day, etc.) hrs a day, day after day, like I was in the 90s & early 00s are gone forever, physically impossible now. Especially if I'm ficcing, because that's basically an either/or proposition, now. :-\

May I make the friending mutual? I do so love your fic.

Date: 2009-06-10 02:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spuffyduds.livejournal.com
Oh please do! I have admired yours just forever! That one with the overhead pipes in the bathroom, WHEW. *fans self*

I'm sorry you have hand/wrist/arm badness. That sucks. But yeah, if your typing is limited, definitely use it to FIC more!

Date: 2009-06-11 07:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] verushka70.livejournal.com
Oh, yeah, that was the BDSM dom!Fraser/sub!RayK series. I still have to finish the last story for that... :-\ Maybe I can do it with [livejournal.com profile] ficfinishing... I'd like to give them a happy-ish ending. I can't see Fraser being entirely conflict-free about his more "alternative" proclivities... but I'd like to get him to a place of acceptance.

Date: 2009-06-11 12:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spuffyduds.livejournal.com
OH DEAR LORD YES PLEASE.

*offers you pretty much anything*

Date: 2009-06-12 03:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] verushka70.livejournal.com
Offers of 48 hrs in a day and superhuman wrists would be good. *g* Sadly, this can only be granted by supernatural beings, who have yet to come my way and wave a magic wand at me. That'd be cool, though, wouldn't it?

btw, a most *excellent* icon you've got there (Spike & cuffs). Is that a hint? *g*

Date: 2009-06-09 06:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pharis.livejournal.com
Jerry was used to a barren life.

Oh, this hurts so good! So painful, and so in keeping with the movie. Jerry is always trying to forge a connection through some kind of exchange. And he's always rejected: people saying "I won't owe you a favor. I won't have even the simplest social contract with you." And this thing with Joe seems to be an exchange ... but it's not, because it's not Jerry that Joe is with.

He stirred the ashes, looked for glowing coals

Beautiful line.

Date: 2009-06-10 12:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] verushka70.livejournal.com
Thank you so much. Yes, I try to semi-specialize in "hurts so good" angsty type stuff. Actually, it's not really trying... it seems to dominate what comes out of my ficbrain, whether I like it or not. Hmmm...

And what an insightful comment -- very true about Jerry in the FTWHTWD context, and the authenticity (or lack thereof, I guess) of Joe's side of the exchange in this story. I've never quite articulated Jerry in FTWHTWD that way to myself, but you're spot-on with that. In many ways, FTWHTWD is a portrait of a not-bad, not-scary guy who's been branded bad and scary because of bad decisions and bad associates... and who will forever be marginalized by the community because they fear and hate him.

I love your icon. A pegasus, right? But it's almost more like a, I don't know, a pegasus-dog. Like Dief with wings. I could totally see that. omg, how cracked is that? Diefenbaker wingfic. I am cracked. Never mind !

Date: 2009-06-10 06:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pharis.livejournal.com
a portrait of a not-bad, not-scary guy who's been branded bad and scary

Well put. Poor Jerry.

I love your icon.

Yay! I actually commissioned someone to draw that -- it's from a photo of my dog, who died about a year ago. I'm so glad you like it -- he was my baby, and anything that keeps him in memory is nice.

Date: 2009-06-10 06:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pharis.livejournal.com
Forgot to say ...

Diefenbaker wingfic.

OMG YES! There really, really needs to be Dief wingfic in the world.

Date: 2009-06-10 09:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] verushka70.livejournal.com
Well, whoever you commissioned to draw that icon was really good. Because it does come off as more a pegasus-dog (or dog-angel) than a pegasus. To me, anyway!

I'm so sorry to hear about your dog. I just recently got a dog myself -- who is a total sweetheart -- but I hadn't had a dog since my old dog died in 1994. I just couldn't get excited over another dog that wasn't her, you know? At least not until this ultra-happy black lab of my sister's turned out to be causing my 1 yr old nephew's severe allergies... which is how I wound up with him. It's good to have a dog again. I have cats, and love them to death, too -- but they are not the same.

Yes, Dief wingfic! Hunting down donuts, arrowing down like a hawk to snatch up untended pizza and sandwiches!

Date: 2009-06-11 02:15 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] akamine_chan
Okay, now I've got Diefenbaker wing!fic stuck in my head! (getitout!!!!).

I don't even like wing!fic.

You two are evil.

Date: 2009-06-11 06:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] verushka70.livejournal.com
Okay, now I've got Diefenbaker wing!fic stuck in my head! (getitout!!!!).

I don't even like wing!fic.

You two are evil.


Bwaaahahahaha! *g*

Date: 2009-06-11 07:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pharis.livejournal.com
Okay, now I've got Diefenbaker wing!fic stuck in my head!

*evil grin*

He'd be seated in the station, looking innocent ... but the tip of one wing would streeeetch out to knock a donut off someone's desk. And when he was pleased with himself, instead of his tail wagging, his wings would flutter.

Date: 2009-06-11 07:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pharis.livejournal.com
I just recently got a dog myself -- who is a total sweetheart -- but I hadn't had a dog since my old dog died in 1994. I just couldn't get excited over another dog that wasn't her, you know?

Oh, I know. But yay for the right dog finding you at the right time!

Date: 2009-06-11 07:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] verushka70.livejournal.com
And the right time for him! My sister & her hubby were so heartbroken when they found out my nephew was allergic to Linus (my dog). He's so good with babies & kids & he was great with my nephew. So it was kismet, I guess.

There's a slight problem with my bf... who is allergic to my dog... and wants to cohabitate... but we're in negotiations about that. He's allergic to my cats, too... and I'm not giving them up -- they've been with me longer than the 6 yrs I've been with him -- nor would I give up the dog, just when he found his forever home! But I digress...

Date: 2009-06-10 01:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] brigantine1.livejournal.com
Ooo, I quite like all of these - the imagery is right there; plenty of it, but nice and compact. If that makes sense. \o?

The first is my favorite, with Dief dragging Fraser along to a place he knows will do them both good. Wise Dief. :)

Date: 2009-06-10 01:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] verushka70.livejournal.com
Thank you very much for the fb. Yes, Dief is wise. I think his slothfulness (as described by Fraser!) is something Fraser could learn from, if he let himself. He's a bit too driven. But then, I think that drive is at least a bit of him running away from himself.

Date: 2009-06-27 04:44 pm (UTC)
ext_3190: Red icon with logo "I drink Nozz-a-la- Cola" in cursive. (dS: diefenbaker)
From: [identity profile] primroseburrows.livejournal.com
They stood, together, thrust out into the dark, rough sky and water, seemingly at the edge of the world.

The wind-borne bite of the winter-to-come soothed.


If anyone wants to do fanart for this, I'd pimp it to the high heavens. Gorgeous snapshots, both of them. :)

Date: 2009-07-08 03:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] verushka70.livejournal.com
Thank you so much. Sorry for the late reply. I'm not sure who might be interested but feel free to pimp.

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